This week we have been looking at plays and trying to write our own scripts.
The task was to pick two famous people who might meet. Describe what they are like, how they came to meet, what they said and then what happened.
Here are two of the results:
Jim carry is a man who like’s to make people laugh.Tony hawk’s is a person that likes to skate and has heaps of fans.
Jim was walking
down the road. Tony hawks was riding down the road and he tripped up on a rock and went flying into Jim carry. And he got up.
Mr H: “Are you alright? Sorry about that”
JC: “It’s alright! Where were you going to in a rush?”
Mr H: “ I was going to the skate park. would you like to come too and maybe I could show you a few moves if you like Jc” sorry I don’t think I’ll be able to make it
MR.H” why’s that JC”
“I was planning to meet some friends for lunch
“that’s all right.”
They just go of and do there own thing.
Jim was walking
down the road. Tony hawks was riding down the road and he tripped up on a rock and went flying into Jim carry. And he got up.Mr H: “Are you alright? Sorry about that”
JC: “It’s alright! Where were you going to in a rush?”
Mr H: “ I was going to the skate park. would you like to come too and maybe I could show you a few moves if you like Jc” sorry I don’t think I’ll be able to make it
MR.H” why’s that JC”
“I was planning to meet some friends for lunch
“that’s all right.”
They just go of and do there own thing.
By EO
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Ryan Sheckler VS Rodney Mullen
Ryan Sheckler, he’s 16/18 years old, he’s a pro skater, he has long hair
Rodney Mullen, he’s a pro skater, he’s’ 25/35 years old, he has short hair
Ryan Sheckler was skating on top of a roof. He had a fans watching him. But he didn’t know that Rodney Mullen was watching as well so he Ryan went to go varial kick flip a gap about 10 meters high in the air. And the fans starts to clap. Rodney Mullen starts to get jealous. And starts to skate, he starts of with a manual then he flips it into a primo and then he flips his board and lands on it with his hands, then lands back on his feet.
Ryan Sheckler came down: “That was great.”
Rodney Mullen :” I thought you were going to come and argue with me.”
Ryan: “ Why would I do that “
Rodney :”Because I stole your fans,”
oh that’s alright said Ryan, You’re a real great skater thanks
WI
Ryan Sheckler, he’s 16/18 years old, he’s a pro skater, he has long hair
Rodney Mullen, he’s a pro skater, he’s’ 25/35 years old, he has short hair
Ryan Sheckler was skating on top of a roof. He had a fans watching him. But he didn’t know that Rodney Mullen was watching as well so he Ryan went to go varial kick flip a gap about 10 meters high in the air. And the fans starts to clap. Rodney Mullen starts to get jealous. And starts to skate, he starts of with a manual then he flips it into a primo and then he flips his board and lands on it with his hands, then lands back on his feet.
Ryan Sheckler came down: “That was great.”
Rodney Mullen :” I thought you were going to come and argue with me.”
Ryan: “ Why would I do that “
Rodney :”Because I stole your fans,”
oh that’s alright said Ryan, You’re a real great skater thanks
WI
4 comments:
ay who is this hahaha crack up. im a skater from kaitaia college as well, left last year.
What is your name? The class wants to know. Are you a good skater?
Do you go to the bowl much?
this is a good piece of writing
Where abouts is the skatepark in Kaitaia?
I would like to add it to http://www.kickflip.co.nz
You could pin-point it by obtaining the co-ordinates of it from this website:
http://www.naffis.com/maphacks/latandlon.html
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